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I felt that the article from 2008 was unclear, so in January 2009 I added the "Two Types of Spiritual Death" section at the beginning of the article. I did not have the time to go through the older half of the article and clean it up or remove any redundancies created by my addition. I think the article would greatly benefit from such a clean-up, but it would involve hacking out large portions of the old article. I didn't know if that would be a breach of etiquette, especially for a new-comer like me, so I haven't done it yet. Does anyone have any preferences one way or the other? Should I go ahead and completely revise the old sections of the article? | I felt that the article from 2008 was unclear, so in January 2009 I added the "Two Types of Spiritual Death" section at the beginning of the article. I did not have the time to go through the older half of the article and clean it up or remove any redundancies created by my addition. I think the article would greatly benefit from such a clean-up, but it would involve hacking out large portions of the old article. I didn't know if that would be a breach of etiquette, especially for a new-comer like me, so I haven't done it yet. Does anyone have any preferences one way or the other? Should I go ahead and completely revise the old sections of the article? | ||
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| + | This is really excellent. I just changed the scriptural references from abbreviations to full words, for the benefit of those who are not so familiar with the scriptures. And I added some internal links. Thank you for this effort! [[User:Gboyd|Gboyd]] 19:56, 10 November 2009 (UTC) | ||
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I felt that the article from 2008 was unclear, so in January 2009 I added the "Two Types of Spiritual Death" section at the beginning of the article. I did not have the time to go through the older half of the article and clean it up or remove any redundancies created by my addition. I think the article would greatly benefit from such a clean-up, but it would involve hacking out large portions of the old article. I didn't know if that would be a breach of etiquette, especially for a new-comer like me, so I haven't done it yet. Does anyone have any preferences one way or the other? Should I go ahead and completely revise the old sections of the article?
This is really excellent. I just changed the scriptural references from abbreviations to full words, for the benefit of those who are not so familiar with the scriptures. And I added some internal links. Thank you for this effort! Gboyd 19:56, 10 November 2009 (UTC)
