Difference between revisions of "Talk:Gordon B. Hinckley"
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| − | This page is a good start but I think it needs to be refined and edited. There are many grammatical errors and it needs more citations. Most importantly, the tone and perspective of the article should reflect the intended readership -- | + | This page is a good start but I think it needs to be refined and edited. There are many grammatical errors and it needs more citations. Most importantly, the tone and perspective of the article should reflect the intended readership -- in its current state it is heavily geared towards members of the LDS Church. |
[[User:Forpeterssake|Peter]] 12:54, 15 August 2007 (MDT) | [[User:Forpeterssake|Peter]] 12:54, 15 August 2007 (MDT) | ||
Latest revision as of 11:55, 15 August 2007
This page is a good start but I think it needs to be refined and edited. There are many grammatical errors and it needs more citations. Most importantly, the tone and perspective of the article should reflect the intended readership -- in its current state it is heavily geared towards members of the LDS Church. Peter 12:54, 15 August 2007 (MDT)
