Talk:Temple district

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Not bad southidaho. I've seen a definite improvement in readability. The easiest problem that you could fix now would be the use of apostrophes. Pluralization ("cars are fun to drive") doesn't use them. Possessives (aka. genitive) ("my car's engine is still warm") usually do use them. (I can think of one exception which just about everybody messes up.)

You seem to have paid a lot of attention to administrative details. That's valuable knowledge and it's nice to have such details here where people can easily find them. --Seanmcox 10:39, 17 December 2007 (MST)